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Hello again! Today we're bringing another story primarily written by Arcadias, but that's not to undermine the editing and polishing work done by E.T. Same daily upload routine, to note.

What's this fic about, you say? The title tells all! A good ol' fashioned simple foot focused tickle torture fic. Long and cruel. No doubt some people wanted something a bit more to the point. Not to say this is short, however! We really go all out for this one.
To give a bit more of a synopsis to this tale, this is an Alternate Universe story where Equestria finds itself at war with an Earth Pony supremacist movement called the Iron Legion, a movement devoid of magic, but wielding tough metal, and unseen technologies. Having lost a battle and been taken captive, the Legion's top general plans to interrogate the Princess for valuable intel regarding the location of the other Princesses (one guess what methods he plans to use...)
Celestia is a toughie however, but is she tough enough to not break under the onslaugh of foot based torments? Read to find out, of course!

As a quick note, tickling isn't the only method at play here. We also spice it up a bit this time with other methods. Perhaps they might not be everyone's cup of tea? But it doesn't matter, because tickling is still very much the focus. We just decided to experiment with variety. As usual, art provided by the wonderful :iconcaroos-dungeon:, so give him your love for the picture too, which he has now uploaded! You can see it, and the tool-less version, here caroos-dungeon.deviantart.com/…
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Awww, we’re reaching the end of the series :(


The podiatrists are a damn impressive bunch (I wonder how Grimstone found/trained them), and it’s an especially cruel way to end a day of tickling with an orgasm overload, what with the contrast of denial earlier on. This is another section I didn’t imagine I would enjoy so much, especially as it isn’t exactly tickling, per se. I suppose it’s Celly’s pride going before a fall? The fact she assumes they messed up a treatment when the truth is everything is going like clockwork? I also find it incredibly amusing that her final orgasm count is past fifty when Pebbles’s initial prediction of forty already sounded so high. Celly’s attempt to move her feet away is clever, but one step ahead is Grimstone and his crew, those cunning folk. The foot massage description was also nicely done, as I have to confess I wouldn't have known how to approach it myself (haven't read many scenes of much nature, I must say).

The punishment of sleeping with her feet in the holes is interesting, and I find it rather amusing what some of the pent up guards would do to the feet. It's a bit surprising that you didn't go into Celly's reaction to Pebble's 'protection' a bit more. Sure, you say she was still 'teased to oblivion', but I do wonder if it was because of the tickling, the foot worship, or being woken up when she was trying to sleep. 

The way you keep raising the stakes with twenty-four escape is brilliant, too, right when I thought the tickling couldn't get more extreme (I love the line about Celly yelling about how her feet couldn't take any more of this, btw). The only complaint I can make about the highest echelon of tickling is your omitting of the beloved heat lamp! I mean, I presume it was used, because, well, it always is :) But still! A bit jarring when you've usually mentioned it every time, haha.